Comments on: Chapter 4 Pg 1

By: ShadowsMyst

ShadowsMyst — Wed, 17 Nov 2010 23:45:51 +0000

If you look in the comments, von Kreiger actually caught it, that’s my mistake in that it should be “gods shit kicked” rather than with a ” ‘s”. I will upload a fixed copy of this page eventually. As for the rain vs reign, I mean rain. As in, rain of fire. Like, wholesale destruction of the world via falling fire.

By: Irrevenoid

Irrevenoid — Sun, 14 Nov 2010 03:46:55 +0000

I’m not clear on what that second sentence “…the god’s shit kicked man’s ass…” is meant to be? Is that “the shit [presumably meaning 'stuff' rather than literal shit. o_O] of the god kicked man’s ass”? Or maybe “The gods shit-kicked man’s ass”? Something else?

Also, do you mean ‘rain’ or ‘reign’?

LOVING this comic, btw. Great stuff!

By: revelever

revelever — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 03:58:29 +0000

Just discovered your comic. Thank you for bringing back the lost art of insults!

By: ShadowsMyst

ShadowsMyst — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 21:18:30 +0000

Ah hah hah.. you are completely right. I should have put it that way. *faceslaps* I’ll have to fix the page later. Of course this would be the one page I didn’t save the editable version of because I intended to redo it. I’ll update/fix it when I upload the page for this week.

By: Wolfhardt

Wolfhardt — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 08:51:03 +0000

I think the page is fine as it is. Transfers a certain mood, very autumn-like ^^ Me like it

By: Sogulas P.

Sogulas P. — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 07:59:49 +0000

*parades aroudn with anti-warmth poster* bring the chill!!!!!
and Darshe has a simply “wonderful” way with words

By: Sen

Sen — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 20:42:36 +0000

I hate the cold too! Yay!

I loooove Darshe’s narration forever.

By: Von Krieger

Von Krieger — Sat, 28 Nov 2009 19:33:44 +0000

Are you using God as a singular or as a plural? If you mean multiple gods, you need to shift the apostrophe over past the S. So that it’s Gods’.